love the energy!
theres one critical piece missing in my eyes... the bass! Try adding a bass to get some proper pumping action with those drums.
also, look up sidechaining! you can use it to lower the volume of your other tracks when your kick hits. that way, the drums dont have to be so loud just to be heard. like look at the visualizer above to see the difference in loudness of your drums vs everything else. sidechaining allows you to turn the drums down while still letting them be very clear in the mix. hope this helps!